I think even at 128 kbs it shouldnt sound this bad, the problem is in the recording maybe?
The character concepts are nice, art has its style, base story is ok but timing could be better. You could capitalize on the funny character concepts a bit more, that alone would carry the whole animation on its back, after the sounds are fixed that is.
Still ok for a first entry and a compo one too.
I liked it. A bit short but fun.
Its clearly visible that you have put a lot of thought into this. Even the puzzle was clever and challenging. Music is also bearable. And that is from someone who doesnt even like the genre.
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