I think even at 128 kbs it shouldnt sound this bad, the problem is in the recording maybe?
The character concepts are nice, art has its style, base story is ok but timing could be better. You could capitalize on the funny character concepts a bit more, that alone would carry the whole animation on its back, after the sounds are fixed that is.
Still ok for a first entry and a compo one too.
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